For the past few weeks we have been working on narrative writing, we had to watch a short film and then we had to add on to the video we watched. Here is what I made up for my story. Enjoy!
Hey Bailee. I really like the way you have started your narrative story - you have used some great descriptive language. Next time think about continuing that through to the end of your narrative. Keep up the good blogging!
Hey Bailee. I really like the way you have started your narrative story - you have used some great descriptive language. Next time think about continuing that through to the end of your narrative. Keep up the good blogging!
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